I had a talk with simon and this helped me as I now have changed my ideas for my storyboard.
Its not going to be all just the journal, it will be filmed clips of me writing the journal/putting the journal in my handbag.
Not sure how I am going to do this yet but I will do another mind map and a few rough storyboards until I come up with my concept.
I am still sticking with the journal idea as I want my advert to be different to the usual story typical makeup adverts. I like mine being ‘different’.